When I went to pick the kids up from school it was raining. And Ethan was crying. Harmony wouldn't hold his back pack for him, because she didn't want to get a piece of paper wet, that she was holding. It was a story that she had written. I asked her if I could put it on my blog and she said yes. I am sure she would appreciate some comments on her story. She did not get any help whatsoever. BTW- if you don't have her email it is evergurl6@yahoo.com Here is the story....
Once upon a time a band of pirates didn't know what to do in tell a girl named Ruby The Pirate Beauty & they made her there captain. She felt very humble. At first a pirate named Taquan stepped up and told her what was wrong. What was wrong was the other pirates had a captain...which was a girl. So they thought if they had a girl captain they would be twice as powerful. " But no girl has been like her." said Ruby. " Oh yes you can" said all the other pirates. Taquan said, "War starts tomorrow." Then Ruby remembered who that other girl was...HER FRIEND! She could not bare the truth, she just couldn't tell the other pirates but she had too. Because she was the captain she told the pirates & they LAUGHED! A pirate named Naven said "That's the craziest idea I have ever heard." Tomorrow came very fast. So fast that Ruby could hardly go to sleep. Next morning Ruby got her armor from Antonio. Antonio was an army boy. The others decided to help & Ruby was glad that they would help her. THEY WON! Ruby was sad that she had to fight her friend. Then Raven came over to tell her something and to show how bad she had felt when it happened to her. Ruby felt better.
THE END
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